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Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.06 17:44:00 -
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Disclaimer: Do you want to be part of this, the story? And have your name immortalised on the DUST 514 forums? Join Synergy United: https://forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&t=96256&find=unread
Prologue: Dropship down
"Hold on, Mist! Don't let go!" Mist gritted his teeth, as he tried to hold on to the mount of the blaster, wich already was shot off. "Stell! Put this thing down!" Was the last thing Mike yelled at him, the dropship started to lose altitude, at a rate that was too fast to be good. Mike groaned frustrated, and pulled Mist back in the dropship. "Alright Mist we be doin' this ****! Stell, prepare to jump!" Stell nodded, and put on the autopilot, giving them a few valuable seconds. Mike jumped out, and Mist looked briefly at him. Stell jumped out of the cockpit, and Mist saw him activating his inertia dampener. He was about to jump, wjen the engine exploded, the blow smacked him in the cockpit. The ship was crashing, gaining more speed and speed, down towards the ground. Mike saw the dropship, and knew that Mist was still in there, and started screaming his lungs out. "Mist! Get out! It's going to blow! Mii-" The rest of his words got lost in the deafening sound of the other engine exploding, triggering the fuel tank into an explosion. Stell shaked his head and grabbed Mike's shoulder. "Mist is gone, man, nothing we can do now." He pushed Stell of "**** that, we're going to get him, now!" Mike started walking, but suddenly dropped down dead, there followed a gunshot. Stell sweared, and looked around for cover, his brain was working at an incredible field. He saw no cover nowhere. He knew this was his end aswell. He sighed, and threw whoever was watching the finger, before also dropping to the ground, dead.
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Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.06 17:46:00 -
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Reserved for more story. |
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Posted - 2013.08.06 17:48:00 -
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Reserved for more story. |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.06 17:49:00 -
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Reserved for more story.
Feel free to criticise, I'm quite new to writing fiction, I've written before, but I can always do better.
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Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.06 23:19:00 -
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U-u-updatef |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.18 17:49:00 -
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And another update.
And this one's reserved. |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.18 17:50:00 -
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Reserved, going with bumps as reserves xD |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.19 20:38:00 -
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Updated. |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.21 20:42:00 -
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Updated the story, almost catched up with current time..
Also, please criticise, I'm stumbling in the dark wether it is good or bad. |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.08.24 16:49:00 -
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Belgium, dutch is my native language, dutch and english grammaf are different
Thanks for the tip though.. |
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Posted - 2013.09.13 20:51:00 -
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Finished chapter 3, starting 4 now. |
Mistaahh Juvenile
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Posted - 2013.09.13 22:30:00 -
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A collab would be nice, however, Mist enjoys the title 'Independant TaskForce' and won't make alliances to political involved parties, he'll fight for them if they show ISK..
However, if the field sappers are neutral and not pollitically involved, wich I doubt, he will seal an alliance.
However, Mist likes Steady, so if Steady's a requesting party you'll get serviced quicker and with a higher priority. |
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